“Happiness paragraphs, it gives a brief information on what

“Happiness
is not something readymade. It comes from your own actions.” As said by Dalai
Lama (Cutler, 2010), we might be just
sitting here waiting for happiness to come to us. We must search for a meaning and
not happiness itself. Although authors Ginny Graves and Ruth Whippman both wrote
articles on the same context, the way they explained happiness differ
significantly. Author Graves argues that joy comes from doing more of what you
value and noticing the small pleasures. Whereas author Whippman noted “if we
want to be happy, we should really be aiming to spend less time alone” claiming
that the foundation of happiness is a social connection. From the given
arguments and evidences both authors wrote, author Ginny Graves has presented a
more persuasive case compared to Whippman’s article.

 

Firstly, as compared to Whippman’s,
Graves acknowledged her general audience pretty well. Graves’ writing is easier
to follow with well-organized paragraphs. For instance, her headings on each
new body paragraphs, it gives a brief information on what she is going to say
in the following paragraphs which is why her writing is easier to fully
understand. Another key take-away from her writing is that she stated her
thesis statement at the beginning of her article: “Winning the lottery or
nabbing a promotion doesn’t actually bring us lasting bliss, research shows.

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The new thinking: Joy comes from doing more of what you value – and noticing
the small pleasures already in your days.” On the other hand, Whippman’s
article is a bit wordy and hard for doing a close reading. For example, in her
first paragraph instead of her thesis statement she wrote about an application
which messaged her every hour with a positive affirmation and how she had a
hard time choosing the application. Moreover, the article didn’t have a clear
structure without any outlines. For instance, that makes the readers confused and
not wanting to closely read it.